sábado, 19 de marzo de 2016
- The role of women in politics has impacted the society.
- crime has decreased in colombia.
In the recent years, women have reached positions in which, they have shown their capacities to overcome the discrimation, the role of women in politics have impacted the masculine society, so that, in old times, women were not permitted to take decisions and participate in men businesses.
Since women took part in the government, crime has decreased in colombia, improving people's quality of life and making them feel more secure and comfortable when going to wherever place, enjoying and having great moments in family.
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The topic sentences need to be part of each paragraph.
ResponderEliminarSupport is not clearly related to the topic sentence, it is not clear how the role of women in politics has impacted society.
The second paragraph seems incomplete; more support should have been added.